From my table, I see the old men playing pétanque for hours on end. I watch, impressed, as their heavy metal balls clink effortlessly against their opponents’, decades of practice making the gesture as natural as walking.
From my table, I hear the school bell signaling students and teachers. I listen to its cheery, etherial music as it marks the passing hours.
From my table, I feel the tram rumble far beneath me as it runs on the track directly below my street. I think of the thousands of strangers getting off and on the train each time it passes by.
From my table, I smell the new candle I bought last week, scented with orange blossom. I inhale the sweet floral perfume and my mouth waters thinking of the delicious navette cookies, traditional in Marseille, scented with the same fragrance.
From my table, I taste my afternoon snack of Granny Smith apple slices spread with store-brand nutella. I savor the tart, tangy juice of the apple mixed with the sweet, nutty chocolate. ❂
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I feel like we are right there with you because you paint such a detailed picture with your words!!
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I love your incorporation of the senses and pictures and words to put together a moment that I can smell, see, and almost taste! Well done!
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I LOVE this style of post! THank you for sharing 🙂
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Yummy words, yummy senses, yummy France!
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Beautifully written!
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You always try out such great structures! I really enjoyed this.
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